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Moonlight Starburst
A million times an hour
there's a racetrack spinning around
like a top the best feeling is when it flies off
the table and lands randomly on the universe.
I can't believe the taste of gum sometimes,
it explodes in my mouth like a star
as it electrifies taste buds until they burst
gushing like a river, or a dam that collapsed.
I see the light of the stars
long after they have gone supernova
until time has stopped, their light shines
on the raindrops that show us the way.
I never eat starburst
I always look at the package and remind myself next time,
and then I reach the corner store and buy something else,
next time I say, there will always be a next time.
by lw end -<>
Is this what love is like?
doomit Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ya know you aren't selling this love thing very well! :P

But I am glad you enjoyed this :)

I was going to give it to a female friend, I'm debating doing that now.
EyeGoCrazy Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
love the visual, this piece made me crave strawberry bubblicous. to answer your question, love is like fucking your best friend. Most days it's really great. You like being with them, and it's easy to get along. On other days you can't stand them, their attitude drives you crazy, and that passive aggressive way they sigh makes you want to punch them in the face. But what makes it love is you know that tomorrow will be another day when you can't imagine life without them. Basically Love is a mental disorder. lol
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